I spent more time on the cookie site. I'm trying to fine tune any details that need to be explained or anything that would make it easier to understand. The challenge is using as few words as possible because nobody wants to read a novel if they want to only order a few cookies. It's easy to lose an audience if they see more words than they think they want to mull through. So, I'm trying to get key messages across without being too wordy.
Editing skills in action.
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